Malta Soron@sopuli.xyztoCasual Conversation @lemm.ee•Almost 25 years with my girlfriendEnglish
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14 days agoRandom idea, but maybe you could offer to drive her around for a few days, so she can relax and you can spend some time together.
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Random idea, but maybe you could offer to drive her around for a few days, so she can relax and you can spend some time together.
I think it’s a good way to show-don’t-tell. You could add a few more of these interactions to develop the plot point and make sure readers don’t miss it the first time around (e.g. if the reader doesn’t know what a nipple piercing is, or doesn’t associate it with teen rebellion).